Gus Keller
Apr 151 min read
They Will Kill You
They Will Kill You is almost there. It establishes relatable motivations. The high-concept plot invites satire. This leads to broader themes of dehumanization plus more personal ideas of abandonment. However, it lacks sufficient payoff. The story becomes repetitive and needs an arc (though at least there's external resolution). This is because its protagonist acknowledges her flaw immediately, so there's no internal conflict to overcome. There's decent setup/payoff, clear st






















